What extended metaphor can i use to describe an athlete?
Question by Hannah: What extended metaphor can i use to describe an athlete?
Paticularly a sprinter, i need an extended metaphor to decribe. For example (though i dont want to use this) : The sun – his smile was golden, legs like long rays, speed of light etc.
Answers appreciated.
Best answer:
Answer by Jefe
It depends on what you want to convey about the sprinter. If you don’t like the sun rays metaphor, although I think it’s very appropriate, try a flustered puppet desperately pumping its legs (if the speaker is looking at him/her from afar), or describe him/her as one who wants to escape from a problem–perhaps you can see it in his/her expression, or a statue that suddenly comes to life.
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